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The noise from the gigantic speakers is now beginning to irritate Violet. She need to yell out to Henry just to talk. Henry tries to reply, but his voice was unable to be heard through the music. He then looked as if he is searching for something, and pulled out a napkin. Why would he need a napkin here? Okay then. Violet saw him writing words down on top of it. He then handed it to her. His cold, freezing skin brushed against hers, surprising her. She have forgotten about it. She jolted back a bit because of it. Violet hold the napkin in her hand and read it. She nodded and agreed. This place is very over crowded.
The story is good, but a little more action, nothing is really happening, just talking, people who read this will think its booring, make it intresting, if you do this as parts, you need to have somthing exciting happening in every part, that people wana read the next part.:)